[quote name='Grido' timestamp='1311058759' post='88237']
Avatars shouldn't have a background to them, so the shading around the figure would have to get erased when editing I guess (no idea whatsoever how the editing programs work)
I know you said about cleaning up the linework, but a bit more detail maybe as well? I like the hand that's on show, but the feet look a little blank in comparison. No idea what the orb thing is either, and a little dark overall.
XD I feel mean saying a long list, I do like the general idea though, and I think you do have some skill with a pencil, just needs a