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Bashaw Steel

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  1. Hey! Dont you guys dare delete the shiny Island!
    I remember when i woke up after some time and found myself there. While it was kinda odd at first, i quickly
    learned how to like it. There is always Azull or Ai there to offer help, plus its artwork is unmatched. That Island is everything MD is just in a refreshing way.
    Hey, i know. If you guys decide to remove it, put the whole island in that book on Clash of Ages, behind some spell.
    Ye, and put me in there while you are at it:)

  2. I asked Bash how he feels and i must tell you that that guy is insane, period.
    It`s like there is at least five different people under his skin, out of which Bash himself is probably the worst!
    I am writing this and i feel that he wakes once more, please... hel...
    ...lo there, folks!:D

    Joke aside, it was great hour, Ungod was great too! Who would have thought that:))
    Bring it anytime, shiny folks! 

  3. 1. Security services. Many years of experience. Can advice on pretty much anything here. 
    2. Expert in Duklja/Zeta/Montenegro history, folklore and legends. Teacher and guide with 3 years of experience in these things with Montenegrin literature included. 
    3. Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Poetry/Horror stories writer with 3 published books, along with 3 others ready for publishing.
    4. Master woodcutter with over 15 years of experiences.
    6. Philosopher with many short stories on the meaning of life, soul, spirit and all delicate universes between.
     

  4. I think its very heartwarming:)
    Just dont too wise or too strong, folks, otherise you might lose your hair!
    As for plagiarism, at least when it comes to poems, repeating verses in such manner is called enclosed composition..
    You should give yourself more credit, Ungod:)

  5. If you are aware of your talent it is only a matter of time before you get a hold of your writing frenzy. Fire needs to be tamed:)

    When i begin a story i have this shiny perfection in my head and i instantly fall in love with it.
    Now, when i start to write slight imperfections begin to appear and they tend to grow the longer the book, hence why i told you 
    to focus on shorter stuff. Thing is, this is where hard work comes to play. Without it, you are just someone who have a story
    within you, not the writer himself. You must present yourself as worthy of your gift or half-finished story will always come back to haunt you.

    You have refine taste for occult themes where innocence is main protagonist, perhaps you should try the same field:)

     

  6. Nice to see you still on the track!
    Do you read something particular that drives you to create, ignnus? Or does it "gnaws" at your soul, urging you to let it go?:)
    To be honest, your ideas are far better than the way you are presenting them. Try to make many short stories from this at first.
    It will be rewarding to your mind that you accomplished something meaningful and there is less room for mistakes along the way:)

  7. Congratulations, Ignnus! May written word bring to you what others could not:)

    I read the first part so here goes..

    Avoid "ifs" in character introduction. It makes them look weak not by nature but by design, its better to start with more clear insight to their 
    capabilities.

    It is smart to describe the inner workings of the character first and then get to their agendas, ambition, goals etc.. So reader can follow and justify their action
    which always has to be aligned with their inner self. Every "why" has to has an answer sooner rather than later.

    Avoid creating a protagonist that is of opposite gender of your own:D Seriously, its far harder that people think.
    For some reason female writers are far better in such things than man, to be perfectly objective:)

    Most importantly, keep on writing and learn from mistakes. It`s a fascinating journey, Ignnus, never get tired of walking;)

  8. Hooorey!

    Thanks to Mur, Taintsinger and my friends at 12man(y) syndicate, you guys rock:)
    I will put this wp to good use as soon as i know which one is that if i dont forget it in the first place.

    Stay tuned for more insanity as Ungod and me present to you our brand new adventure full of laugh, entrails and maddening horror tour
    soon enough:)

    Public apology to Ungod since i cant be in MD as much as i would love. Few are the chains as those of the stars

  9. The best part of MD is that you can go all out with your philosophical self and still be considered partially sane:D
    And even if you are not, it only adds to the charm:)

    Dark Demon and Sushi are especially heavy hitters, you guys made my day.
    Time is, however, most insidious thing one can imagine. Just think about it. It can be described as a part of perception, or something that has numerical value,
    a concept of our deeds and memories as unfailing proof of our past. All of that and much more can be taken into account and be considered as correct. I think 
    it was Einstein who said that-if you cant explain something simply then you dont understand it well enough. Time is difficult to explain because time is a man made thing and not
    a law of nature. Stuff happens, earth spins, people die and are born, its not because of passing of time but rather because of cause and consequence. Our reality is just shaped in a way where circular things have more sense and, our minds as demon said, perceive such happenings to be in time.
    Time is only time because we named that split second in which we exist like that. We could named it sugar squirrel and have the same results. The greatest reason that puts 
    time as such in this position is because it has no beginning. And time as we made it has to has one. Day begins with dawn. Night with dusk. Life with birth. Everything in time has a starting point except the time itself. Mur said how he had been thinking about his problem for a long time. Regardless of that, it is natural to assume that his thinking has a starting point. If there is a start there is also the end. But if there is no start then there is no end. So, even with memories, even with power to alter the reality itself, you will still have to deal with the beast that will repeat itself. And if you are alive in this world and caught in the loop, you will also repeat yourself. So, to leave message to past self is to actually send message to your future self. All things considered in the time loop, that is the only way to cheat the message without SF or spiritual elements:) 

  10. Nature of the time loop is such that regardless what we do to remind us would be good for nothing. Time does not rewind itself to the beginning of the loop
    but rather resets, so any means of cheating the message would not be possible. If i plant a tree in my garden during that time interval in which i am aware 
    of time loop, record whats happening, leave cryptic stuff or even kill myself, none of that would matter. Plant will not become a seed, record would not exist or any other 
    stuff i left behind including my death. That is because behind itself does not exist. Time loop is not a line of time but rather a circle. If you guys like the night sky like me
    you also like the stars. Thing about stars is that most of those we see are actually dead. What we see is actually a picture hundreds of thousands years old, if we teleport somehow
    to their place in an instant, there is a good chance that they would be dead. Time does not travel faster than light but rather have the same speed and light of the stars we are able to see is actually and literary-past. So, to send a message to yourself one must send it in far space with speed of light and make it somehow come back. Breaking from the time loop by actually becoming part of some other time and coming back into the time interval we are aware of our time loop would break the "curse" and allow us to see whats really happening:)

    As a side note, time loop is, by far, a greatest punishment one`s councessnes would have to endure. Being aware, even in an instant, that your existence is bound in time loop, even if your future self probable exist outside of it, is brutal:D 

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