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  1. That makes more sense. Speaking of uniqueness and feminism (as per this topic's tag), I know of a book where you can get moral values from to add to your repertoire of feminismy allure for your novel. This book is the epitome of moral integrity when it comes to this subject, even the author made hid her real name so as not to be bombarded by people of how good of a human being she is:
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  2. Lazarus

    WTB Basic Crits

    Alright sure, thanks Beak!
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  3. Lazarus

    WTB Basic Crits

    Looking for: 2 Elementals 4 Birds 4 Trees All should be aged and heated enough to advance to their final levels. Will pay in Silvers. Please PM if interested.
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  4. I think you have a character there. Needs slightly more work. Do you plan on writing a bunch of such characters and then make interact? if so, it might be interesting.
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  5. i am confused on the situation, it would probably help to introduce the MC beforehand and maybe the situation, unless it was your intention to throw the reader into that without it. also it seems contradicting itself a little? or is it just me?
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  6. It would help giving her some background story as to why she thinks this way, perhaps a degree in gender studies or men with snouts surrounding her would suffice.
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  7. I hope you don't mind me being blunt, but it reads like you've been dumped by an overweight woman and are very bitter over it. Perhaps take a step back and be a little more objective towards the protagonist? (Just a suggestion)
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  8. BFH

    Farewell MD!

    Hey All- Today is my last day within the MD Realm. Casually, I spent the last few days exploring all lands, to my surprise, I discovered two scenes I never saw before! Then I didn't imagine that it would lead to a perfect farewell, but so it happened, the last walk through MD. *Ambitions: I guess I fulfilled most of my personal ambitions for MD. Although I never became King! Shame! I will proudly call myself the King of Nothing! *Moments: One of my favourite MD moment was one of the times I played Confused Santa. That night two of us played the account, so the shifting personali
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