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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from lashtal in A new value unit - donating hours of my life :)   
    1. Security services. Many years of experience. Can advice on pretty much anything here. 
    2. Expert in Duklja/Zeta/Montenegro history, folklore and legends. Teacher and guide with 3 years of experience in these things with Montenegrin literature included. 
    3. Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Poetry/Horror stories writer with 3 published books, along with 3 others ready for publishing.
    4. Master woodcutter with over 15 years of experiences.
    6. Philosopher with many short stories on the meaning of life, soul, spirit and all delicate universes between.
     
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Jubaris in A new value unit - donating hours of my life :)   
    1. Security services. Many years of experience. Can advice on pretty much anything here. 
    2. Expert in Duklja/Zeta/Montenegro history, folklore and legends. Teacher and guide with 3 years of experience in these things with Montenegrin literature included. 
    3. Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Poetry/Horror stories writer with 3 published books, along with 3 others ready for publishing.
    4. Master woodcutter with over 15 years of experiences.
    6. Philosopher with many short stories on the meaning of life, soul, spirit and all delicate universes between.
     
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Eara Meraia in A new value unit - donating hours of my life :)   
    1. Security services. Many years of experience. Can advice on pretty much anything here. 
    2. Expert in Duklja/Zeta/Montenegro history, folklore and legends. Teacher and guide with 3 years of experience in these things with Montenegrin literature included. 
    3. Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Poetry/Horror stories writer with 3 published books, along with 3 others ready for publishing.
    4. Master woodcutter with over 15 years of experiences.
    6. Philosopher with many short stories on the meaning of life, soul, spirit and all delicate universes between.
     
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from ignnus in I'm Starting a Novell /Any Help appreciated!   
    Ignnus, quoting parts of certain thought will often mislead you especially if you think about them as a whole.
    Parts are exactly that-parts. I wrote that to show you how i feel about writing and how you should avoid things
    i learned the hard way. My mistake, perhaps i was too Bashy:D 
    You do how you think is best, best of luck:)
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from ignnus in I'm Starting a Novell /Any Help appreciated!   
    If you are aware of your talent it is only a matter of time before you get a hold of your writing frenzy. Fire needs to be tamed:)
    When i begin a story i have this shiny perfection in my head and i instantly fall in love with it.
    Now, when i start to write slight imperfections begin to appear and they tend to grow the longer the book, hence why i told you 
    to focus on shorter stuff. Thing is, this is where hard work comes to play. Without it, you are just someone who have a story
    within you, not the writer himself. You must present yourself as worthy of your gift or half-finished story will always come back to haunt you.
    You have refine taste for occult themes where innocence is main protagonist, perhaps you should try the same field:)
     
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from ignnus in I'm Starting a Novell /Any Help appreciated!   
    Nice to see you still on the track!
    Do you read something particular that drives you to create, ignnus? Or does it "gnaws" at your soul, urging you to let it go?:)
    To be honest, your ideas are far better than the way you are presenting them. Try to make many short stories from this at first.
    It will be rewarding to your mind that you accomplished something meaningful and there is less room for mistakes along the way:)
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from ignnus in I'm Starting a Novell /Any Help appreciated!   
    Congratulations, Ignnus! May written word bring to you what others could not:)
    I read the first part so here goes..
    Avoid "ifs" in character introduction. It makes them look weak not by nature but by design, its better to start with more clear insight to their 
    capabilities.
    It is smart to describe the inner workings of the character first and then get to their agendas, ambition, goals etc.. So reader can follow and justify their action
    which always has to be aligned with their inner self. Every "why" has to has an answer sooner rather than later.
    Avoid creating a protagonist that is of opposite gender of your own Seriously, its far harder that people think.
    For some reason female writers are far better in such things than man, to be perfectly objective:)
    Most importantly, keep on writing and learn from mistakes. It`s a fascinating journey, Ignnus, never get tired of walking;)
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Ungod in I'm Starting a Novell /Any Help appreciated!   
    Congratulations, Ignnus! May written word bring to you what others could not:)
    I read the first part so here goes..
    Avoid "ifs" in character introduction. It makes them look weak not by nature but by design, its better to start with more clear insight to their 
    capabilities.
    It is smart to describe the inner workings of the character first and then get to their agendas, ambition, goals etc.. So reader can follow and justify their action
    which always has to be aligned with their inner self. Every "why" has to has an answer sooner rather than later.
    Avoid creating a protagonist that is of opposite gender of your own Seriously, its far harder that people think.
    For some reason female writers are far better in such things than man, to be perfectly objective:)
    Most importantly, keep on writing and learn from mistakes. It`s a fascinating journey, Ignnus, never get tired of walking;)
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Ungod in Poetry   
    There is no such thing as "too lazy":D
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Ungod in a fragment of my broken mind   
    Will read all this shiny stuff when time allows but had to stop and admire 
    this handwriting for a moment.. and to think i`d be jealous for something other than hair:D
    Anyway, happy new year, folks! May you remember it in a way worthy of living:)
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Sushi in How would you send messages in the past?   
    Hooorey!
    Thanks to Mur, Taintsinger and my friends at 12man(y) syndicate, you guys rock:)
    I will put this wp to good use as soon as i know which one is that if i dont forget it in the first place.
    Stay tuned for more insanity as Ungod and me present to you our brand new adventure full of laugh, entrails and maddening horror tour
    soon enough:)
    Public apology to Ungod since i cant be in MD as much as i would love. Few are the chains as those of the stars
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Muratus del Mur in How would you send messages in the past?   
    Nature of the time loop is such that regardless what we do to remind us would be good for nothing. Time does not rewind itself to the beginning of the loop
    but rather resets, so any means of cheating the message would not be possible. If i plant a tree in my garden during that time interval in which i am aware 
    of time loop, record whats happening, leave cryptic stuff or even kill myself, none of that would matter. Plant will not become a seed, record would not exist or any other 
    stuff i left behind including my death. That is because behind itself does not exist. Time loop is not a line of time but rather a circle. If you guys like the night sky like me
    you also like the stars. Thing about stars is that most of those we see are actually dead. What we see is actually a picture hundreds of thousands years old, if we teleport somehow
    to their place in an instant, there is a good chance that they would be dead. Time does not travel faster than light but rather have the same speed and light of the stars we are able to see is actually and literary-past. So, to send a message to yourself one must send it in far space with speed of light and make it somehow come back. Breaking from the time loop by actually becoming part of some other time and coming back into the time interval we are aware of our time loop would break the "curse" and allow us to see whats really happening
    As a side note, time loop is, by far, a greatest punishment one`s councessnes would have to endure. Being aware, even in an instant, that your existence is bound in time loop, even if your future self probable exist outside of it, is brutal:D 
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Mallos in How would you send messages in the past?   
    The best part of MD is that you can go all out with your philosophical self and still be considered partially sane:D
    And even if you are not, it only adds to the charm:)
    Dark Demon and Sushi are especially heavy hitters, you guys made my day.
    Time is, however, most insidious thing one can imagine. Just think about it. It can be described as a part of perception, or something that has numerical value,
    a concept of our deeds and memories as unfailing proof of our past. All of that and much more can be taken into account and be considered as correct. I think 
    it was Einstein who said that-if you cant explain something simply then you dont understand it well enough. Time is difficult to explain because time is a man made thing and not
    a law of nature. Stuff happens, earth spins, people die and are born, its not because of passing of time but rather because of cause and consequence. Our reality is just shaped in a way where circular things have more sense and, our minds as demon said, perceive such happenings to be in time.
    Time is only time because we named that split second in which we exist like that. We could named it sugar squirrel and have the same results. The greatest reason that puts 
    time as such in this position is because it has no beginning. And time as we made it has to has one. Day begins with dawn. Night with dusk. Life with birth. Everything in time has a starting point except the time itself. Mur said how he had been thinking about his problem for a long time. Regardless of that, it is natural to assume that his thinking has a starting point. If there is a start there is also the end. But if there is no start then there is no end. So, even with memories, even with power to alter the reality itself, you will still have to deal with the beast that will repeat itself. And if you are alive in this world and caught in the loop, you will also repeat yourself. So, to leave message to past self is to actually send message to your future self. All things considered in the time loop, that is the only way to cheat the message without SF or spiritual elements:) 
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Mallos in How would you send messages in the past?   
    Nature of the time loop is such that regardless what we do to remind us would be good for nothing. Time does not rewind itself to the beginning of the loop
    but rather resets, so any means of cheating the message would not be possible. If i plant a tree in my garden during that time interval in which i am aware 
    of time loop, record whats happening, leave cryptic stuff or even kill myself, none of that would matter. Plant will not become a seed, record would not exist or any other 
    stuff i left behind including my death. That is because behind itself does not exist. Time loop is not a line of time but rather a circle. If you guys like the night sky like me
    you also like the stars. Thing about stars is that most of those we see are actually dead. What we see is actually a picture hundreds of thousands years old, if we teleport somehow
    to their place in an instant, there is a good chance that they would be dead. Time does not travel faster than light but rather have the same speed and light of the stars we are able to see is actually and literary-past. So, to send a message to yourself one must send it in far space with speed of light and make it somehow come back. Breaking from the time loop by actually becoming part of some other time and coming back into the time interval we are aware of our time loop would break the "curse" and allow us to see whats really happening
    As a side note, time loop is, by far, a greatest punishment one`s councessnes would have to endure. Being aware, even in an instant, that your existence is bound in time loop, even if your future self probable exist outside of it, is brutal:D 
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Muratus del Mur in How would you send messages in the past?   
    The best part of MD is that you can go all out with your philosophical self and still be considered partially sane:D
    And even if you are not, it only adds to the charm:)
    Dark Demon and Sushi are especially heavy hitters, you guys made my day.
    Time is, however, most insidious thing one can imagine. Just think about it. It can be described as a part of perception, or something that has numerical value,
    a concept of our deeds and memories as unfailing proof of our past. All of that and much more can be taken into account and be considered as correct. I think 
    it was Einstein who said that-if you cant explain something simply then you dont understand it well enough. Time is difficult to explain because time is a man made thing and not
    a law of nature. Stuff happens, earth spins, people die and are born, its not because of passing of time but rather because of cause and consequence. Our reality is just shaped in a way where circular things have more sense and, our minds as demon said, perceive such happenings to be in time.
    Time is only time because we named that split second in which we exist like that. We could named it sugar squirrel and have the same results. The greatest reason that puts 
    time as such in this position is because it has no beginning. And time as we made it has to has one. Day begins with dawn. Night with dusk. Life with birth. Everything in time has a starting point except the time itself. Mur said how he had been thinking about his problem for a long time. Regardless of that, it is natural to assume that his thinking has a starting point. If there is a start there is also the end. But if there is no start then there is no end. So, even with memories, even with power to alter the reality itself, you will still have to deal with the beast that will repeat itself. And if you are alive in this world and caught in the loop, you will also repeat yourself. So, to leave message to past self is to actually send message to your future self. All things considered in the time loop, that is the only way to cheat the message without SF or spiritual elements:) 
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Sushi in How would you send messages in the past?   
    The best part of MD is that you can go all out with your philosophical self and still be considered partially sane:D
    And even if you are not, it only adds to the charm:)
    Dark Demon and Sushi are especially heavy hitters, you guys made my day.
    Time is, however, most insidious thing one can imagine. Just think about it. It can be described as a part of perception, or something that has numerical value,
    a concept of our deeds and memories as unfailing proof of our past. All of that and much more can be taken into account and be considered as correct. I think 
    it was Einstein who said that-if you cant explain something simply then you dont understand it well enough. Time is difficult to explain because time is a man made thing and not
    a law of nature. Stuff happens, earth spins, people die and are born, its not because of passing of time but rather because of cause and consequence. Our reality is just shaped in a way where circular things have more sense and, our minds as demon said, perceive such happenings to be in time.
    Time is only time because we named that split second in which we exist like that. We could named it sugar squirrel and have the same results. The greatest reason that puts 
    time as such in this position is because it has no beginning. And time as we made it has to has one. Day begins with dawn. Night with dusk. Life with birth. Everything in time has a starting point except the time itself. Mur said how he had been thinking about his problem for a long time. Regardless of that, it is natural to assume that his thinking has a starting point. If there is a start there is also the end. But if there is no start then there is no end. So, even with memories, even with power to alter the reality itself, you will still have to deal with the beast that will repeat itself. And if you are alive in this world and caught in the loop, you will also repeat yourself. So, to leave message to past self is to actually send message to your future self. All things considered in the time loop, that is the only way to cheat the message without SF or spiritual elements:) 
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Fang Archbane in How would you send messages in the past?   
    The best part of MD is that you can go all out with your philosophical self and still be considered partially sane:D
    And even if you are not, it only adds to the charm:)
    Dark Demon and Sushi are especially heavy hitters, you guys made my day.
    Time is, however, most insidious thing one can imagine. Just think about it. It can be described as a part of perception, or something that has numerical value,
    a concept of our deeds and memories as unfailing proof of our past. All of that and much more can be taken into account and be considered as correct. I think 
    it was Einstein who said that-if you cant explain something simply then you dont understand it well enough. Time is difficult to explain because time is a man made thing and not
    a law of nature. Stuff happens, earth spins, people die and are born, its not because of passing of time but rather because of cause and consequence. Our reality is just shaped in a way where circular things have more sense and, our minds as demon said, perceive such happenings to be in time.
    Time is only time because we named that split second in which we exist like that. We could named it sugar squirrel and have the same results. The greatest reason that puts 
    time as such in this position is because it has no beginning. And time as we made it has to has one. Day begins with dawn. Night with dusk. Life with birth. Everything in time has a starting point except the time itself. Mur said how he had been thinking about his problem for a long time. Regardless of that, it is natural to assume that his thinking has a starting point. If there is a start there is also the end. But if there is no start then there is no end. So, even with memories, even with power to alter the reality itself, you will still have to deal with the beast that will repeat itself. And if you are alive in this world and caught in the loop, you will also repeat yourself. So, to leave message to past self is to actually send message to your future self. All things considered in the time loop, that is the only way to cheat the message without SF or spiritual elements:) 
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from DARK DEMON in How would you send messages in the past?   
    The best part of MD is that you can go all out with your philosophical self and still be considered partially sane:D
    And even if you are not, it only adds to the charm:)
    Dark Demon and Sushi are especially heavy hitters, you guys made my day.
    Time is, however, most insidious thing one can imagine. Just think about it. It can be described as a part of perception, or something that has numerical value,
    a concept of our deeds and memories as unfailing proof of our past. All of that and much more can be taken into account and be considered as correct. I think 
    it was Einstein who said that-if you cant explain something simply then you dont understand it well enough. Time is difficult to explain because time is a man made thing and not
    a law of nature. Stuff happens, earth spins, people die and are born, its not because of passing of time but rather because of cause and consequence. Our reality is just shaped in a way where circular things have more sense and, our minds as demon said, perceive such happenings to be in time.
    Time is only time because we named that split second in which we exist like that. We could named it sugar squirrel and have the same results. The greatest reason that puts 
    time as such in this position is because it has no beginning. And time as we made it has to has one. Day begins with dawn. Night with dusk. Life with birth. Everything in time has a starting point except the time itself. Mur said how he had been thinking about his problem for a long time. Regardless of that, it is natural to assume that his thinking has a starting point. If there is a start there is also the end. But if there is no start then there is no end. So, even with memories, even with power to alter the reality itself, you will still have to deal with the beast that will repeat itself. And if you are alive in this world and caught in the loop, you will also repeat yourself. So, to leave message to past self is to actually send message to your future self. All things considered in the time loop, that is the only way to cheat the message without SF or spiritual elements:) 
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    Bashaw Steel reacted to Sushi in How would you send messages in the past?   
    A timeline infographic based on my silly idea above😂:

    1) Experience the same period of time repeatedly.
    2) Return to the beginning stage of the events without memories.
    3) The “aware" periods, too late to change anything but keep sending the messages to other people in different universes.
    4) Other people's timelines(parallel universes) with infinite possibility.
    5) Time travellers from another future, bring back the messages before irreparable damage occurs.
    6) Avoid making the same mistakes and start a new page.
    (OR maybe after that you won't be able to know if you did the right change until the next time loop, so basically you are keep making the "right" choices. If everything is connected maybe its some kind of reincarnation...)

    The reason I use parallel universes...I think maybe the time loop didn't completely reset or reverse, coz we still have the "aware" periods that we can actually remember the things we did or the thoughts between the loops, so it DID happen in the past and the action will have consequences.
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    Bashaw Steel reacted to DARK DEMON in How would you send messages in the past?   
    Here are my thoughts on this. I'm just typing what I'm thinking. The answer is somewhere in here, and its not a 'here do this' kind of solution. Because it can't be that simple.
    Its very long: get ready for a ride. But the read is worth it, I promise  
    Here goes:
    ------------------------------------------------------
    Ok so everything resets. Any physical amendment, any environmental changes, etc. This means there is no 'external' solution to this one. Anything affected by time as we know it can't be the solution. This led me to think of two things: the solution either lies in something that is 1) unaffected by time, or 2) it is affected by time, but unlike as as we perceive it. Let me explain what this means.
    Time is not a real quantity. It is a concept. A concept is a mental structure in which we associate things with each other: a source and a target (take note). To alter the concept of time and memory, you have 2 potential options.
    One is the source: the brain itself. There are various centers in the brain involved in memory formation, (specifically the hippocampus and associated structures --- read up on Papez circuit if you wish to go into details of this), which have a wonderful ability to 'trap' a piece of time and store it. This is called a memory. Sounds beautiful doesn't it?
    If you alter the brain, you are changing time as we perceive it (as noted above). Hence this is a potential hole in the loop.
    The other is the target: the sun/moon. This is what mankind uses to perceive time. I'm talking about solar/lunar calendars, the concept of a 'day', a 'month', a 'year'. These are all dependent on the movements of the sun and moon, eg: rising and setting of the sun, solar and lunar eclipses, full/half moon cycles, etc. If you alter the sun/moon somehow, you can send a message because these are unaffected by time. In fact they are targets mankind uses to create time. So technically controlling them will control time. Thus, this is the second potential hole in the loop.
    Both of these are two extremes of the spectrum of a 'concept' called time. The source and the target.
    So we have narrowed it down to this. Next we have to decide which path to take. Looking at the capability of a human being, resources available, and the time interval in which we can make changes after realizing (you say its a day, right?), the best choice seems to be the source. Altering the sun/moon in any way is beyond human capability and nothing can be done in a day
    -------------------------------------------------
    So we alter the brain. How? Well like I said, the solution can't be external. You can't just insert a device in the brain to alter memory formation. Then what?
    I mentioned the hippocampus and Papez circuit earlier. There is a beautiful natural method of creating and storing memories in time. Now what you have to realize is that only humans have such an elaborate mental structure. No other species or form of life does. What does this mean? It means that just like we see life with less elaborate mental structures, there must definitely be potential to create or BECOME a more elaborate mental structure! One that possibly allows to alter the entire concept of memory formation and time in such a way that your 'past' self can 'recall' things... from the 'future'... which is currently your 'present'... 😮 
    Yes sure call this absurd all you want. I'm sure if a goat told another goat, "hey you know maybe we can talk and write one day", the other goat would laugh. And that is because it is impossible to comprehend or imagine what the beautiful mind has the capability to do. That is what 'the true potential of our minds is untapped and locked' means after all. Once you unlock that capability, you can do things that previously you thought were 100% impossible.
    So that is the answer. You have to unlock the capability to do so, in that one-day time interval. I cannot tell you how to do it because like I said, it is beyond comprehension and imagination. Our minds cannot perceive such a concept yet. But it can happen one day, from within.
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Fang Archbane in How would you send messages in the past?   
    Nature of the time loop is such that regardless what we do to remind us would be good for nothing. Time does not rewind itself to the beginning of the loop
    but rather resets, so any means of cheating the message would not be possible. If i plant a tree in my garden during that time interval in which i am aware 
    of time loop, record whats happening, leave cryptic stuff or even kill myself, none of that would matter. Plant will not become a seed, record would not exist or any other 
    stuff i left behind including my death. That is because behind itself does not exist. Time loop is not a line of time but rather a circle. If you guys like the night sky like me
    you also like the stars. Thing about stars is that most of those we see are actually dead. What we see is actually a picture hundreds of thousands years old, if we teleport somehow
    to their place in an instant, there is a good chance that they would be dead. Time does not travel faster than light but rather have the same speed and light of the stars we are able to see is actually and literary-past. So, to send a message to yourself one must send it in far space with speed of light and make it somehow come back. Breaking from the time loop by actually becoming part of some other time and coming back into the time interval we are aware of our time loop would break the "curse" and allow us to see whats really happening
    As a side note, time loop is, by far, a greatest punishment one`s councessnes would have to endure. Being aware, even in an instant, that your existence is bound in time loop, even if your future self probable exist outside of it, is brutal:D 
  22. Like
    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Jubaris in How would you send messages in the past?   
    Nature of the time loop is such that regardless what we do to remind us would be good for nothing. Time does not rewind itself to the beginning of the loop
    but rather resets, so any means of cheating the message would not be possible. If i plant a tree in my garden during that time interval in which i am aware 
    of time loop, record whats happening, leave cryptic stuff or even kill myself, none of that would matter. Plant will not become a seed, record would not exist or any other 
    stuff i left behind including my death. That is because behind itself does not exist. Time loop is not a line of time but rather a circle. If you guys like the night sky like me
    you also like the stars. Thing about stars is that most of those we see are actually dead. What we see is actually a picture hundreds of thousands years old, if we teleport somehow
    to their place in an instant, there is a good chance that they would be dead. Time does not travel faster than light but rather have the same speed and light of the stars we are able to see is actually and literary-past. So, to send a message to yourself one must send it in far space with speed of light and make it somehow come back. Breaking from the time loop by actually becoming part of some other time and coming back into the time interval we are aware of our time loop would break the "curse" and allow us to see whats really happening
    As a side note, time loop is, by far, a greatest punishment one`s councessnes would have to endure. Being aware, even in an instant, that your existence is bound in time loop, even if your future self probable exist outside of it, is brutal:D 
  23. Like
    Bashaw Steel reacted to ignnus in Poetry   
    Whining (of mine)
     
    the world of madness
    would be more than it's talent
    yet the evolution and sadness
    crunched your visage to what it was
     
    winking all along while lecturing
    as if the degradation would give thee power
    so wrong would be normal
    to how not quite to be human
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Pipstickz in Looking for a book   
    Indian philosophy is often centered about ideas that revolves around many aspects of the same thing.
    Tough pill to swallow if you yourself is not compatible with such beliefs. Philosophy of ancient wisdoms are indeed a good read.
    However, it is smart to avoid such finite paths of thoughts because they are, well,  infinite. They stretch without end and you cant step beside that path
    because there is nothing to step on. So you just go on and on and each time you take a new path, you start from the beginning.
    If you have a spark in yourself for such things, dont force it into molds of already made philosophy. Let it guide you instead, not lead you:)
    If you cant resist Indian truths, i suggest you read the works of Antonio de Melo. That guy is like a One Punch Man in that world:D
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    Bashaw Steel got a reaction from Lintara in Poetry   
    Some say that our flesh is more of a prison to a soul than it is a home. Sometimes, however, spirit refuses to bend
    and burns ever stronger through the iron bars of our lives. Sometimes, its not about flesh, its about host...
    This one was/is for you, kid:) May you rejoin MD better than i ever did..
    Who has the soul full of tiny cracks
    Through which golden sheen flows
    Who has within those unborn stars
    …In space of guilty and remorse
     
    I see the sky, full of footprints
    A shining traces of once daring child
    Leading into mountain carved in Steel
    A home?
     Or a prison, for its golden sheen…
     
    Where beats heart that is one with the Sun
    Somewhere deep, hidden and enclosed
    Where is the child that stands for her dreams
    And golden sheen flows…
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